This is so good n i feel like this a lot of the time u put it into words so well, well done

This poem is amazing, it has a lot of emotion in it. keep the great work up =D

-chelseaa;

ps. thanks for the sweet comment

Hey i reALLY like this poem as well. um, i hope u dont think i was upset im glad u like my poem and dont think it needs rewording but i honestly do a[ppreciate constructive critisim i want to make my work as good as it can be. also i don't think its good 4 ur teacher to draw on ur painting!!!:)

The concept and the imagery on first stanza, the way it was written was capitvating, the idea to fly from a suffocating reality. The ending was a lift to the sorrow felt, a resolution, to find peace, it illuminates the prospect of it being possible to break free. Well Done.

Naerwen

I think any poem that makes one feel, and think is a good poem, and this conjures up many feelings for me.. well done

I think any poem that makes one feel, and think is a good poem, and this conjures up many feelings for me.. well done