That's what work can do to you! Keep you in chains! Wow Laur, this was a great poem! Definitely feeling lonely these few weeks. I tried writing a poem about it, but I just can't!.. But you definitely nailed all those emotions down! Good job!

Well done, Laura, a very good poem, i could feel the emotion and pain through every line, couldnt see any faults
keep writing
xxxxxx

An excelent read, I really enjoyed it. The emotian was clearly portrayed in every line, and this was my favourite thing about this poem. The vocabulary used was really great, as it didnt use too complicated lanuage, yet not too simple either. One thing that i think you should of used is punctuation. But other then that, theres nothing more i can say. Keep up the fantastic writing! xx

Wow this poem is really good. I'm sure at some point we all look at the person they see in the mirror, I know I have. Sometimes we don't agree with what we see or what we have become. Past mistakes take there tolls with time. I really loved this poem excellent flow and amazing job overall 5/5

Wow, Laura! This is awesome! The eyes are the windows to the soul, and if you could look in my eyes you'd see this poem in me. Excellent work!!

Oh wow...another fantastic write.
There was so much emotion in this, I found it to have a lot of depth.
Again, my favourite part was the imagery.

Wow!
Great flow to the poem and the vocab used was great.
5/5

Sad. The flow is good. I like your word choice it is not too simple as other poems I've read on this site. Nice job!

Wow wonderful write. I loved it. The flow as well as the strucutre was good. Keep up the wonderful work.

Peace, Joe

A great write with great word choice, keep it up, i is so great.

This poem was kind of dark... i like it. you did an amazing job at this. your rhyming was perfert.. and the flow was amazing. I loved this part the best:

Trapped behind invisible bars
Created by my imagination
Confined to a life of solitary
Only deepened by my isolation

Amazing job babe

5/5

Amazing. really well done! keep it up!

Hey this poem was really good. it was really deep and powerful and the word u used to express urself were great. very well written 5/5 xx

Omg that reminds me of me i want to just tell everyone all my regrets and secrets
but i love you poem you got great taste

It's good 5/5!

This is really good, Laura! But so sad.. The third stanza is my fave.

"Not the grown woman
But the helpless child in me"
^^^ Love this line!

A really honest, powerful, and sad piece. But so beautifully written.

Strong poem. Great job!
5/5
♥
~Stephen White