Red

by Poetvoices   Jan 9, 2007


Red
drip, drip, drip
the wax that drops on my skin

red
drip, drip, drip
the blood that pours from my cut

red
drip, drip, drip
my eyes are dripping and red

red
drip, drip, drip
I'm angry at myself for crying

red
flash, flash, flash
colors flash before my eyes

BLACKOUT

white
drip, drip, drip
Am I in Heaven?

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  • 17 years ago

    by Ruthie

    Hmmmmm. that scared me my love. but nice to see your exploring different writing techniques. keep it up beautiful! love you

  • 17 years ago

    by Cody

    Your originality never ceases to amaze me, I love the use of repetition in this poem and the sudden change in the color in the end creates a very intresting ending

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