I like the bit bout the mirror and the dishwasher. i like how this is funny and sad at the same time, i liked the bit bout the bed and the pillows but that bit was sad. could u comment my poem 'don't make my mistakes' or any of my otha 1s if ya have the time. tnx n once again lubs da poem.
I almost NEVER vote on a poem unless I genuinely enjoy it to the point of being moved in some significant way. And I've had a crap week, have just got in, and read this as the evening's 3rd poem. And it not only made me smile, it made me laugh out loud with quite the most poignant line I've read for a while.
I have mixed emotions on this one cause I totally love it, don't get me wrong. But I'm not sure if I should laugh b/c your talking about inanimate objects feeling pain...or if I should cry b/c you're feeling all the things you're talking about since he's been gone. But you did an exellent job, keep it up! :) You an Marcus should callaborate more! Heeehee!