Comments : The Death Ball...

  • 17 years ago

    by Espoirfailed

    This is so dark n chilling, leaves such a lingering thought in ur head. well done

  • 17 years ago

    by aisyned

    *cries* so sad yet scary *shudders* hehehehe im gonna write a dark one mohahahah lol goodjob deadgirl

    your buddy,


  • 17 years ago

    by Miranda

    Hiiiiii how r u doing cuz ha i knew that i would leave u a mess. well i just luv this 1 its #1 ^_^ see ya bye-

  • 17 years ago

    by NeferNoir

    It's so morbid and surreal, yet I can't stop reading until the last line.. this is a truly amazing poem! It is haunting yet comforting in an odd ethereal way.. 5/5!! :)

  • 16 years ago

    by ShiaSuperman

    Wow,This is amazing...My fav I can say..