Just my thoughts

by David   Jan 11, 2007


I am sorry. this will not rhyme. this is not a poem. these are my thoughts.

for who has the heart to downgrade poems? do you read them? or do you just go to each poem after the 30seconds and vote 1, which is poor.

i do the maths. key. one of my greatest poems. 10 votes and all of them were 5s. then i got one more vote. 11 votes for 4.6. put that in your calc. thats said that him/her voted one. not a two or i would have got a 4.72727 rep. but a 1. to give me the 4.6

but if it was the perfect poem would you have changed your vote? i doubt it.

but now i hide, should i continue to submit just so that they get voted 1s????????? it wrecks the fun.

this is a dark poem for a reason tho, not a sad one, (even tho i am sad, cut and broken) but it is dark cause of the silent anger.

David screams: i am sorry!!!!!!!

i never wanted to let you down, but how did i know that sometime in life i would.

meh. so go ahead. vote 1 on this. for the rest i dont want you to do anything to this. no votes, but you can comment to tell me your opinion.

thank you.

David

now a day later. i have found out that the site admin found out by a friend of mine and deleted all the unfair voting. phew. but i will keep this writing up tho. just cause it will remind the person that i will not fall, i will stand tall!

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  • 17 years ago

    by Mousie

    Wow, who cares if it's not a poem great job! really a wonderful write 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by heather

    I kno this doesnt ryme but i loooove ur thoughts! ahhhh! idk why someone would do that but PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE keep posting poems! i love reading them! ur too good...you cant quit now.

  • 17 years ago

    by Hebe

    Don't stop writing. Maybe that one person doesn't like your poems. But that doesn't count for all of us!.. Most people love your poems as far as I can see. So please keep writing for those who like them, including myself.
    'cause you're really good!
    Hebe

  • 17 years ago

    by Static

    Dave i wont repeat wat everyone that loves ur writing (as do i) has said. U have som many ppl in ur support one person cant ruin it. I know that and im sure deep down you do too. Be strong dave no one can take u down to their level ur too strong for that. Keep it up and thx everyone for supporting dave. Dave's poems foreva woo!

  • 17 years ago

    by Marjan

    Keep standing tall! :)

    thanks for your comments man!
    much appreciated!
    take care,
    Marjan