Wow! great job, so dark and intense. This is a kind of poem that grabs my intrest 100%. Loved it!

Ooooooo i LIKE it! so inspirational for a writing piece. your writing helps me improve my writing. keep it up and thx for the comments! they mean a lot to know that ppl read and like my poems!

This is some deep deep stuff ilove it

5/5. Wow. This poem had a rush of sadness in me. I felt like I was in the poem Great Write.