The Three Words (Collab)

by David   Jan 12, 2007


You know how to save me,
But still you let me die,
Your silence is killing me,
Like a painful goodbye,

The rain is pouring,
And I am alone,
Sitting, bleeding,
but cold as stone,

My blood has stopped flowing,
And my mind is stop,
My body is weak,
Ready to drop,

Your words mean so much,
and you spit them with such grace,
Poison in my head,
Speeding in my heads race,

Ive told myself no,
But my heart will not listen,
And my feelings pour out,
As my tears glisten,

In the shady moist,
Air full of doubt,
I am still waiting for you,
When you no nothing about,

How much I love you,
I no cannot be said,
So my heartache will be quiet,
And weight on me like lead,

You know what im feeling,
And you leave me sitting here,
I have been hurt,
but how can I feel bad my dear,

You have taken me,
from my death bed,
And given me the life,
That without I'd be dead,

I ask only one thing,
If I am to let go,
Just three words,
Do you love me so?

Written with James D

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  • 17 years ago

    by Curry

    Heyy tell james that i really love this poem and he did an amazing job writing it.=D

  • 17 years ago

    by heather

    Wow......that's thats...really good. im speachless...or lol typeless in this case. i love it. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Sandra D

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    *Shawte*

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni

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    by Shawnee

    Oh wow!! i love this poem! you did a great job no doubt about that!