Love's Destiny

by Romantic Lover   Jan 12, 2007


She finally fell in love
Two hearts fluttering as one
He was so into her
Their love as bright as the sun

He loved her very much
Spoiling her with flowers and gifts
So blinded by her love
Never thought they'd ever drift

Out at a party
He whispered in her ear
This flower I give to you
Hoping you always stay so near

So young and naive
She didn't know how to respond
What is he trying to say
Tie a forever bond?

She was scared and confused
And decided to end this love
She wasn't ready for commitment
And didn't realize thats not what he was thinking of

He often tried to visit
She kept pushing him away
Refused his flowers and letters
He was left with no words to say

Months went by
As they went their separate ways
Until one day they met at a party
He couldn't help but gaze

Sparks were in the air
Feelings began to surface
Finally coming to the realization
That with him she's in heavenly bliss

I want you back, she said
This time I won't let go
Just give me a chance
My true love will show

He said "As difficult as it was
I've finally moved on
Losing you was so hard
Couldn't believe you were actually gone"

He needs time to think
"Just be patient with me
What do I want in my life
With you do I want to be?"

Days turned into weeks
She began to lose hope
She's finally ready for commitment
He's finally in her scope

There was another guy
Who loved her very much
Does she commit to him instead
Or wait for her lovers touch

Spending more time with him
He soon proposes to her
Life's wheels are spinning fast
And she doesn't want to err

It's the day of the engagement
Looking beautiful and slim
She hears the phone ringing
It's a message from him

"Tell her, I've thought about it"
What does all this mean
Does he want me back
And start with a slate clean

Does she follow her heart
Or listen to her head
What is the right thing to do
What truth lies ahead?

What should she do?

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  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    OHMIGOSH!!
    This has to be my favourite of your's I have read.
    I thought the flow was flawless, the imagery beautiful and even though it was long it held my interest the whole way through.
    Excellent work.

  • 17 years ago

    by lisa

    Wow i love this huni.great job x

  • 17 years ago

    by Jamie

    Amazing poem. very interesting. n thx for commenting on mine =]

  • 17 years ago

    by kayla T

    Aww this one was really good, you are great at poem writting, im not that good but hopefully i get better! lol. well keep up the great work, and ill keep commenting!! :]

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Excellent job! Really liked this write. I loved the way you ended it with the mystery of the question unanswered.