Wow such a beautiful poem =) I love the way you make things rhyme 5/5 great work

Great poem.. beautifully written! Love should be from the seven wonders of the world!
take care..
luv,,
haya 3gab =]

This is so sweet, i loved it, it was very beautiful

This a spectacular poem. Wonderful job. *5/5

Fascinasting! your description is beautiful, write more!!^^

This poem possesses the talent of a true poet. The descriptions are very beautiful, and the flow was like a nice, cool breeze. Very refreshing. This is what real poetry is all about.

Ohhh this was just beautiful!
I love everything about this.
The flow was flawless, the rhyme scheme enjoyable, the imagery fantastic.
The first stanza drew me in and it just kept getting better.
Absolutely perfect.