The Devils Eyes of Depression

by XxMoonLightxX   Jan 13, 2007


You will see it in the shadows,
Of mornings early light,
But when it creeps up on you,
You wont be ready to fight,

Around the corners of every edge,
There it stands just waiting to torment its prey,
When you feel it consume your body,
You will be carrying the heaviness it weighs,

You will feel it as it roams you body,
How it sucks the life out of ones soul,
No more happiness, no more faith,
Never again will you sense what it stole,

Like a candle that has burned out,
You totally loose hope and grace,
Longing only for the warmth and comfort,
Of a strong and emotional embrace,

When you loose it all,
And you find nothing more to put into session,
Only then can you feel,
The devils eyes of depression

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  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I LOVED this!
    I adore the last stanza, it has great impact.
    Beautifully written, you have a lot of talent.

    **I tried to comment on the other one of your poems, but it kept stealing my text.
    I thought that too was beautifully written, so heart wrenching, but such a joy to read.**

  • 17 years ago

    by neena

    Hey this one is my fav. poem of yours keep it up! Your great with words!

    *neena

  • 17 years ago

    by nicole

    Very good,
    keep it up.

  • 17 years ago

    by AliveAndEmpty

    I absolutely adore your poems. This is really awesome. And so ture. Take it from someone who knows. Anyway, Love you Shannon XoXo

    UR 4EVER BFF

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    "Like a candle that has burned out,
    You totally loose hope and grace,
    Longing only for the warmth and comfort,
    Of a strong and emotional embrace"

    This poem was amazing. The phrases you use and the whole emotion is just wow. That stanza is my fave.
    Some brilliant wording!
    5/5
    *Gem*

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