Comments : Erase My Life As You Erase My Pain

  • 17 years ago

    by TheWorldFellNUWerentThere

    Now I think this is your BEST POEM ever! I loved how you wrote it! I cannot begin to look for a favorite stanza. They are all amazing! I'm going to give you a 5 out of 5. AMAZING WORK!!

    Happy Valentines Day!!

  • 17 years ago

    by amoxi

    I liked this one the best so far ur a really good writer keep it up

  • 17 years ago

    by Bryan

    Very good poem laura, just make sure you capitalize the i's in every sentence, but other than that this is perfect, 5/5!!!! keep it up!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by ryeann

    OMG i got the chills when i read this !! it was soo great, good job!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Romancing the Darker Side

    Great poem, but the flow got a little rough in some spots. Great job though!

  • 17 years ago

    by Daisha

    This was really moving. I loved it!

  • 16 years ago

    by beth

    The last lines are genius, love it.
    beautiful,
    moving,
    clever but still real. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by SmileeItsBritt

    Wow I really love the ending, nicely written doll!

  • 16 years ago

    by Esther

    Wow-excellent poem...very meaningful, you totally show your emotions.

    Esther XOXOX

  • 16 years ago

    by Anonymous

    Wow this is a good poem. I'm especially impressed because English is not your native language =) Keep up the good work.

  • 16 years ago

    by Woe

    LOOOOVE IT!
    youre a great writer 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Mihaela

    Congratulation!!What a great poem!!Keep on the good work.Take care of you!!Best regards,Michelle xxx

  • 16 years ago

    by CompletelyIncomplete

    Wow what an imagery! Its really cool Daze. I cherished this piece. TC
    U deserve a 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by tears i cry

    Sad yet inspirational
    bold yet beautiful
    peaceful yet strong

    ok i was bored just then but it trully does describe the feeling i got from readin you poems today ill read and rate more of yours after i finish doing some other
    once again this poem is beautiful 5/5 for another exellent piece

  • 16 years ago

    by Adelle

    This poem was very moving a very enjoyable read I liked your choice of words.

  • 16 years ago

    by Catastrophic Beauty

    I really like this poem. It was different; i like different. I loved the repetiton in it. The flow was amazing as well.
    Overall, this poem was marvellously written and I give it a 5/5.

    Keep it up && Take Care!

    -Shannon <3

  • 16 years ago

    by cory

    Wow u r a pro you really made another masterpiece.u rock 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Roxiee An

    Oh My God
    sucha gr8 poem
    Awesome Laura
    well done bestie
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by ForbiddenSnowflake

    Awesome poem. I can relate to it so much. Keep up the good work!!!

    Bridget

  • 16 years ago

    by Jeffreys Girl

    This is one of the most AMAZING