by Tian Tian Jan 13, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
secret love
I don't know how to tell you i love you |
by J Lau
Loved it... your title captures the reader right away... even though you took the first part from someone else... you were able to keep the flow... I bet if you re-work the beginning... the poem will be so much more original and better. It's true... feelings that are real cannot be forgotten... I'm sorry that I feel for someone myself. Good write. 5/5 |