The Darkness

by hypergirl   Jan 13, 2007


He thought he didn't need
what we humans live for
so he strayed
he broke away from God's love
and fell into the darkness

the darkness is sin,
don't fall in

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  • 18 years ago

    by becca

    This is a really sweet poem and is well written. maybe you could try to make it slightly longer because by doing this the last two lines will be more effective and powerful. Its a really great start though- keep it up nd keep writing! ;-)