The feelings of standing in the rain!

by Cherish   Jan 13, 2007


As i stand here in the rain
my life reflects, and i try to explain
the gentle drip of the water flow
I'm thinking so deeply but i still don't know
the feeling of the rain touching my skin
a beautiful warmth rises within
a feeling so pure i cannot say
so i get on my knees and start to pray
thank you lord for giving me this
the feeling inside is so much bliss
so as i stand in the rain
soaking my clothes but feeling so sane
i feel so FREE beyond belief
i have no worries or any grief
i feel so alive
and inside i thrive!
But as the rain seems to come to an end
the world i then see, we need to amend
so take your time when it starts to rain
and get the feeling I'm sure you will gain
so i then close my eyes and wish to stay
in the fantasy i could live everyday

*PLEASE COMMENT AND VOTE N I WILL RETURN THE FAVOR*

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  • 17 years ago

    by Zoe

    This was an amazing poem! i seriously like fell in love with it! keep it up cuz u really know wat ur doin when u write! 5/5
    x!x

  • 17 years ago

    by XfromwithinX

    I don't know where you get your ideas from girl but you sure as hell need to take me there. laura xx