Sweet poem
this is a nice piece
love it...

I really luv this poem, it's amazing!!! i can like totally relate to this, a while back, but i know the feeling.i love the way it rhymed. great job, ur an amazing writer!! 5/5!!

*Shawte*

Thank you for the comment

i really like this poem it is very good

5/5 love linda

Whatup. i rather liked the imagery and rhyme in the poem. and i think everybody feels like that sooner or later. good work

Ahh, i ask myself these questions everyday, but I guess it just means we're growing up. I loved this poem, but I think it would be better if you captalized your letters at the beginning of each line.

--Steph

Ohhh i love love love love this poem!

I loved this!
Very powerful and I could sense the pain behind the words.
I enjoyed the imagery and I thought the flow and rhyme scheme worked really well.

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Nice write. I like the wording of this line: insane she's been driven

I also can relate to this poem, as I'm sure many people can..which is always a positive in poetry.

Keep writing! 5/5

So sad how sometimes love can break a heart. Very sorrowful rendition of that heartbreak...well penned.

This was a nice write. Sad and heartfelt. And, honestly, I can relate to this so much. Beautiful write!! Keep writing!!

-` Liz

That was great keep it up can you comment me on my poem i love you and drugs

love always linda

This poem is very beautifully written! I understand exactly how you feel. Thanks for sharing!

I understand this feeling and its something you can't really explain unless you go through it. its well written and perfectly said. great job

That is such a sad poem, I really enjoyed it though 5/5

This is very good work, keep it up

Another very well written poem.
This flowed well, the context was good, it was a good piece.
i loved the wording and emotion.
love Tara-Kay
xxxx

Well done. i loved it from start to finish

I really like this one. Has alot of depth and meaning to it. 5/5. keep writing!

Nice job love poems are my favorite so u always no im a softy for those nice job!

I really liked it. Another 5/5