Lost love...... 4ever

Woww Well Im returning the comment you wrote me and wow I've read a couple of your poems and your really good! =)) And this poem man can I relate to you! I went through the same thing, was about to have a relationship i didnt want that much but then when he decided that he was over me and got tried of waiting for me, he broke me in two. But i guess it's all a life lesson. Anywayss Take Caree Be Strong and keep writting cause I think you have something! =)) Byee xOox <33
From Liviia.xx

Very good poem but yet again..the U..and dat and all...it would b better if u wrote lik tht and its starting to get my annoyed...well anywayz.. i think u write better in the dark genre topic....it sort of had a better feel in it..

That was really good...something me and many other people can relate to, which is always the best kind of poem...so therefore 5/5....comment back please!!

I liked this, definitely something I can relate to.
The emotion and depth behind the words were clear to see, and I think you did a wonderful job with this.

I really liked it i had the same feelings before
~Rach