This poem really touched a nerve. my girlfriend just broke up with me today. so your poem nearly made me want to cry. i loved it never-the-less. so emotional especially these words
"Alone
Forgotten
Broken"
they express how i feel perfectly. i almost wish i'd wrote this poem.

good work

I like the free flow and honest emotion in this poem

Wow this is a great poem..keep on doing the great work...and thank u so much 4 the comment it really means alot!!! thanx again!!!!

Reminds me.....of life....I like the passion, though it is torment. Good poem. ^_^

Never stop trusting people untill they let you down as you yourself at some time may just hurt someone they same way you have been hurt its the circle of love one day you'll find true love [but you must be patient]in the meantime writting your poetry will always give you an escape route.
a heart felt poem i could relate to but i'm wiser now
and thanks for your comment

Wow, this is a great poem. Keep up the good work! But its good to trust people, and I hope you regain that trust.

This poem is amazing!! i really can relate, that's exactly how i felt when my ex broke up with me, it tore me apart inside. i cried over him, he'd lied to me for so long about the way he felt... but great job! u have a lot of talent, i can't wait to read more!! 5/5!!!

Forever*Yours

Wow you are an amazing writer!

Now this one was really good, really a great write... i'm gonna give you one tip, as you're getting older, work on the vocab, try to steer clear of the generic words, put more description into them... you're already starting to do that, and being the age you are, that's wonderful, you certainly don't write like a 13 yr old... great job, you really have a lot of talent. 5/5

Very deep and very emotional.. many people can def relate to this poem.. very well written.. good job.. keep it up and thanks for the comment =]