Comments : A Letter To Myself

  • 17 years ago

    by Rocky

    I liked that poem it had a nice flow to it. and i understand when you say it was a letter to yourself. my poetry sometimes feels as if my soul is writing it to get through to my ego. the only thing i'd change is"That love truly is real." to - that love is truly real
    not much of a change but it keeps the flow of hard and soft words better
    good work
    rocky

  • 17 years ago

    by Tainted Beauty

    Wow wow wow..this is exactly the poem I needed to read, I can relate to pretty much every word of this. This was beautiful, and VERY well written. Every rhyme and ever line fit together perfectly, I could not find one flaw. Great work.

    --Steph

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    This was so beautiful...straight from the heart, and I thought it was really sweet.
    I enjoyed the flow and imagery, and I thought the rhyme scheme worked really well.

  • 17 years ago

    by Kristina

    Awww this was a wonderful love poem. i really like how it started out sad in the beginning then in the end it turned happy. you did an excellent job writing it! 5/5

    ~Kristina

  • 17 years ago

    by Laurie Tran

    Mindyy` ..
    as always you have outdone yourself.
    amazing poem.
    the flow was excellent.

    keep up the awesome work , love.

  • 17 years ago

    by Tricky Daze

    Got the fow and moving,really cute,keep it up

  • 17 years ago

    by Sandra D

    AMAZING!!!!!!!
    it flows really well, and there's a lot of emotion!
    i adore the last stanza, it's my total favorite, great job!!!!
    5/5!

    Forever*Yours

  • 17 years ago

    by Im In Love What Can I Say

    Well this is a good letter to your self it is great 5.5

  • 17 years ago

    by BeautifulDisaster

    This poem has a nice flow and i can relate ver much to it!

  • 16 years ago

    by RawRCooKie

    Omigosh I really and truly enjoyed this poem it was sweet and it really touched my heart when I read it ~NICE JOB~