''If your looking down on me
You'll know I'm missing you. ''

=( So sad, those lines.

I think this is one of your better ones, well it's one of my favourites anyway.
I lo0oved it!

This is wicked sad I am sry

Omg!!!! this is sad! im in tears right now. =[ awwwww...i love it !!! really good job! 5/5

That's really sad. maybe it needed bigger words? but that really didn't make it like, bad. i really enjoyed reading this. good job and keep writing!
-Parker

Really really good ... i felt the emotion .. almost brought me to tears

Wow..

''If your looking down on me
You'll know I'm missing you. ''

^ those lines.. were just, an amazingly perfect ending.. They really got me. The first half.. i can deffinitley relate to. It brought tears to my eyes, the imagery was so intense. And the wording was good. Flowed well too. But realy really sad. =[ Ahh. I loved it! Great job. Keep it up

Bri.x

Hey Leanne, a heartfelt poem you have written and its very well written to in my opinion, your ryming isn't to forced and the rhythem is good,only thing i dont really like about it is it's legnth i think that if its a personal poem it should be as succinct as possible so you don't give the impression you'r being melor dramatic ,but this is my opinion and it ihas not effected my vote.

So far all of your poems have left me thinking, "wow." you are truly a great poet & you use your ability to write very well. you're great at telling a story through poetry. 5/5

Hi this is an amazing poem
feel a strong rush of emotions outta this one
5/5
love
amy
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