Comments : One more mistake

  • 17 years ago

    by Black night

    Wow, great poem. I kinda no where you're coming from. Youy really get drawn into the peom. 5/5. was bril

  • 17 years ago

    by Black night

    Wow, great poem. I kinda no where you're coming from. Youy really get drawn into the peom. 5/5. was bril

  • 17 years ago

    by Black night

    Wow, great poem. I kinda no where you're coming from. Youy really get drawn into the peom. 5/5. was bril

  • 17 years ago

    by Tricky Daze

    That's it honey,i hope it's not real cos i don't want you to worry,be happy all time,but on the other side 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Raychil

    I absolutely loved this pieice. It's amazing. I just hope its not true, and if it is, you'll get through it, I can tell you're a strong person. This poem was powerful and I loved reading it. It was beautiful.

  • 17 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    This is the saddest poem ever.
    man i hope this a story. any way
    good poem 5/5 ++++++

  • 17 years ago

    by Solus

    I too sometimes feel someone is there.....

  • 17 years ago

    by Boy

    Awwwwwww i realy understand this poem and the meaning behind it... you have talent. gd luck