This was really amazing

This is a beautiful poem! seriously, it's so sweet, i love your choice of words, and it flows really well!!

Forever*Yours

I feel that the line, in the third stanza, "Are you okay?" didn't quite fit in. It feels like you just put it there to make it rhyme. :-/

But otherwise; good flow - ok rhyming (cliches tbh). The content was also good.

Well - I feel you could have gotten more out of this one. Anyways, keep up the good work.

-Kenneth G. @ Facelss Mirror.

I think what really made me vote a 5 instead of a 4 on this poem was the ending. i thought that it was very sincere.

the beginning of the poem did not particularly catch my attention, and i was reading it, but not with much interest until i read through about half the poem.

but, after taking in the entire poem, i enjoyed it thoroughly. good job [:

WOW little one thats a really good one.

Good poem I gave it a 3 because it lacked a personal feel to it from ur perspective. Good work though and keep it up

Almost every rhyme seems forced .. but the flow is good.. its cute but cliche..

Wow that was so dreamy but fine,calling your dream it's like,well done

Awww.....i wish i could send a letter to my future loved one...

Aww. that was so longing and sweet. it was gorgeous hun. very cute

much love and many kisses,
bex

I love the title, and it's so true how that fits to the whole poem...a girl can dream cant she?