But now my soul is empty
My heart like ice
My arms red and sore
From each painful slice.

wow!! I really liked this poem, parts of it reminded me of something else, if you know what i mean lol

This is really good! I know how it feels to feel like that. It sucks. You're poems matches EXACTALLY how I feel. GREAT JOB! 5/5

Wow. this is a very good poem. The descriptions were vivid and I could feel the anguish in the character [you?] Keep up the great work. 5/5

Great poem.. but its kind of weird how its all four lined stanzas and then the last line is three

I'm only one response among several, but i'd like to say well done

' Crabs and Crumpets '

another great piece on your part ... i can relate to this one a lot and feel all the emotion...

Crabs and crumpets This poem must have been written before your 2 angels pulled u out of your slomp. We all get to feeling this way sometimes. Great poem

Great job! The pain and emotion can be felt iin everyword that you have written. Hope things get better soon. Take Care Cindy