Comments : I'll get over you

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Awwwh this nearly made me cry.
    My favourite part was the last stanza, I thought it had huge impact.
    And yes you are right, you WILL get over him!

  • 17 years ago

    by Anonymous

    That's so sad and inspirational... AWWWWWW T3T HEARTS!!

    A few minor things like punctuation and a rough flow bothered me, but it's still very lovely. Keep writing.

  • 17 years ago

    by ALEX

    "With you I felt whole"

    WOW!!! this is honestly my favorite poem that i've ever read ever ever ever!!! GREAT job and i'm definitely adding you to my favorites.

  • 17 years ago

    by angelina

    I love this poem and i feel that i can relate.... i like the way you worded it ..

  • 17 years ago

    by angelina

    Aww this one is good too ... i feel emotion in all your poems and i can relate ... prbly cause guys ... people who hurt you are all the same and somehow kill us inside

  • 17 years ago

    by BrixGoesxRawr

    Aww. This was sad. =[ But really really good. It flowed well, and the wording was good.

    One thing though:

    Slowly I began to realise
    Everything you said was untrue
    Gradually my heart will mend
    I know that I'll get over you.

    ^ That was one of my favorite stanzas.. it had a great impact. But, I think 'realise' should be 'realize'

    Also.. Another stanza I really love:

    Day by day our love grew
    The stars sparkled in your eyes
    If I knew then what I know now
    I'd never be taken in by your lies

    ^ I really loved that. Specially the last two lines of it.. Wow.. just amazing. Great job. Keep it up, Hun.

    Bri.x

  • 17 years ago

    by ShaKayla

    That poem hit home about how I was feeling. Someone I really love is going through that. She was so blind behind him and now its over but she can never just forget him because she got pregnant and had his child.