GoodJob

This is a interesting poem that immediately captured my attention.

"Static eyes staring empty at the floor -
Spiderwebs adorning her broken core" That line is awesome, I love it. Another intense and amazing dark poem, great job! keep up the excellent work!

~jas~

You won 2nd place for this poem in me and my friends joint titles contest.. so please come post which poems you would like us to comment as your award