I liked this poem it was neat, the only think that seemed out of place was how the last stanza didnt rhyme tlike the others, but it wasgood cause it emphasised on it and made it seem more important

This is a wonderful piece, Nat.
I'm not so sure I like how the second line of the first stanza is worded; but no poem is perfect. ;P

I love you so much, hun.
I really do.
I'm not the greatest friend, and I'm sorry for that.
But whenever you need me, I'll be here. Okey?

I love you, I love you.

Keep writing.
You've got talent. ;)

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Hey nat. i really liked this poem; is structure, the words chosen, it was really good. a very touching piece. great job!! xx

Great poem keep it up.

Wow. this poem is very strong. i can feel your emotions in it. the word choice was wonderful and everything sounded lovely. 5/5

This is a very emotional and sad write. Love your word choices. Excellent job!

I like this well done =)

Wow Wow.. Sounds like something I personally would write myself. Great job!

NICE. I like the "straight-forward" emotions contained in this poem.

Wow very short but powerful.
~Kyra~

Wow this is good I loved it

Beautifully written! i loved every line!! amazing!!! keep it up!! =o]