My Candle, My Love

by Jason   Jan 18, 2007


A candle is lit
For you it burns
Never to be extinguished
For in my heart it dwells

Brighter than a thousand suns
It cannot compare
For your eyes be brighter still
A sparkle which makes the stars pale

Glowing warmth its gift
Companion for when you are away
Merely a piece of a roaring bonfire
With you I know not cold

Down many roads
Though many hardships
That light has never faltered
Always will it burn with my love for you

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  • 18 years ago

    by shobhana kumar

    Dear Jason,

    A very beautiful piece of poetry - conveying so much with such few words. There are so many new perspectives in this piece, it really speaks of remarkable talent.

    thank you very much for your comments on my work. I really appreciate the kind words you have to say!

    good luck and i am going right on to read more of your stuff.
    peace and luck
    shobhana

  • 18 years ago

    by Bekka Smekka

    I like the way u use words in ways they woudn't be used. like that the candle is piece of a roaring bonfire
    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Romantic Lover

    Very emotional. Great work.

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