A Wonder

by Brittany C   Jan 18, 2007


Growing on a stone,
cracked with age,
your seed was planted.
By natures own designs,
the only color,
in this barren land.
Where fires of old,
had scorched,
what were once lush land.

What had destroyed,
has now brought life,
Making the land futile,
And just right,
for the beautiful plants.
This flower is the first,
and will thrive,
spreading its precious seeds,
for all to enjoy.
And what a wonder it is.

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  • 16 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    This is not QUITE an "Oh, damn" poem, but it is certainly up there. This is DEFINATELY your best I've read so far, and I believe I'd read 8. Nicely, nicely done.

    xTheEcstasyofSuicidex 5.5

  • 16 years ago

    by Vanessa

    YOu good at writting nature poems. I think this well written, and the word choice is vivid. Great job 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Teria

    This IS your BEST! I loved it. :D They just keep getting better and better as I go!
    First I was like.. I LOVE THIS STANZA ( for the first ) then I was like NO THIS ONE! Lol. You did a great job, keep it up hun. I think you're a nature kinda poet. :D

  • 16 years ago

    by Austin

    This is a good poem...not as good as alot of your others...but good none the less. 3/5...i like your other ones better

  • 17 years ago

    by Debbie

    Ah, what a wonderful poem this is!
    I favored nature poems above all else on this site. This was quite well-written, I must say.
    "Growing on a stone,
    cracked with age,
    your seed was planted.
    By natures own designs,"
    -- I love those lines. Especially the line, "By nature's own designs," it was rather creative, by the way.
    Great job.

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