Its a great start. i want to see it when its finished.

Cant wait to see this finished...keep writing.

Great poem lil kimmie keep it up ure exalent at writing poems

I like it, if u even get a chance read one of mine

Its a good start! i really wanna read it when your done..so keep me updated!

ps. thanks for commenting on my poems :]

Night can be the safest time....and the Terrifying....Very good poem

Its an awesome poem so far