Good work! I look foreward to reading your other poems

Yeah, i liked it very much.
Its really sweet and full of love.
keep writing,
love Tara-Kay

GOODJOB!thanks for commenting my poem!

Ah, this is beautiful. Straight from the heart and packed with emotion. A beautiful love poem that honestly does touch the heart. I particularly liked these lines:

I can't carry on
Without your heart loving me
Without your hands on me
No I can't breath

Again, amazing job on this piece. *5/5

This made me smile.
I loved it.
You did an amazing job on it. :]

Short and sweet, but it also feels almost sad....I liked it 5/5

It was deep and heartfelt i liked it keep it up