Wow, this was very nicely penned. You have a lot of talent. I liked the repetition. The flow was really good, keep up the wondeful work.

Peace, Joe

I am coming back to the site after such a long time and it has been a real pleasure to see your work once again. reminds me of how much i have missed!

good luck to you and do keep writing more often
peace
shobhana

Wow
this poem is real good yo
i can definitely relate to this
im a recovering alcoholic
n this poem hits hard
but its good
yu most deff got talent
keep it up

I like it, alot.
Everyone's already said everything.
the flow, the repitition. . nicely done.
I loved it.

I really really really like this poem.
its perfect.
xx

Beautiful. It's flow went so well I could have turned this into a song, almost. Well written, deep emotions, and overall, an enjoyable read.

Wow I really enjoyed this :)!! Your words flow well togeather ,and you tend to keep a good rythm in your poem.

Your poem was realy realy good!! Mabye you could come over to see mine sometime
^_^

~Sablehuskey~

Let's see...I love:
1. your rhyming
2. your rhythm
3. your word choice

mucho grande 5/5.

Very good
flowed
xD

I love your writting style = ]

Amazing. The rhyme is good and doesn't sound forced. Although one thing...
The repeating stanza:
"I can't believe they fell for you
For not a word you say is true"
I thonk maybe there should be a more precise way you repeat it? I just seems strange to me reading it with it repeating after one stanza, and then again after two.
Good job!
Kelsea