In the dark

by xXxDarkDreamerxXx   Jan 20, 2007


As i shut my eyes
for my life i fight
another long night
as i try to survive

my mind gets tired and numb
i search for an exit but theres none
i pray for a savior but theres no one
a dark melody some one hums.

I'm trapped in a maze
it seems I'm lost for days
my mind is no longer sane
everything is a haze

crawling on the floor
searching for a door
as i carry on with hope
wanting to go back home

I'm growing thin and weak
and i cant get up on my feet
strength is what i need
but all i do is bleed

my body is covered in scars
my heart grows cold and hard
nothing can erase the harm
that is done in the dark.

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  • 18 years ago

    by mier

    Such greatly expressed emotion... You write with such intensity and imagination…Beautifully penned…

    my mind gets tired and numb
    i search for an exit but theres none
    i pray for a savior but theres no one
    a dark melody some one hums.

    Amazing!

  • 18 years ago

    by Rahl The Layman Lord

    I swear...one of these days I am going to make you and onix sit down and write a mushy love poem or something...you are both decent writers...as good if not better than i...but its always sad...be happy damn it
    later ghost:)

    -Jason-

  • 18 years ago

    by Nyx

    My body is covered in scars
    my heart grows cold and hard
    nothing can erase the harm
    that is done in the dark. WOW THESE LINES ARE DEEP EXCELLENT JOB INDIAN(I'll be ur night in shining armor i'll rescue u)

  • 18 years ago

    by jason

    Grr your poekms make me jealous lol i wish i could write like you *sigh*

  • 18 years ago

    by locky

    Who is 1st to comment i believe i am
    in your face
    another great poem you don't disappoint
    5/5 keep up the great work

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