Comments : Loving You (Part 2)

  • 15 years ago

    by Alessandro

    Joe just as beautiful as Part 1, i cannot wait for part 3.

  • 15 years ago

    by TeenXLoveXTragedy

    Another great one..keep it up. cant wait for part 3

  • 15 years ago

    by rainbowliciouz


    maidison boo

  • 15 years ago

    by PoeticLoserface

    I agree with Sandro! it was just as good as part 1. can't want for part 3. keep the poems coming Joe!

    love, Britt

  • 15 years ago

    by Cyma Khan

    Agree wth all ur poems are realy beautiful to read love thm all...waiting for part 3 now

    God bless u

  • 15 years ago

    by lala

    What can I say? another great poem! 5/5 keep it up! ^^

  • 15 years ago

    by Cindy

    I like the way you showed the uncertainess in this poem. Love does that to alot of us. Great job!

  • 15 years ago

    by Perfection

    This was as good as the first one. good work and I shall check the part 3 =D

  • 15 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    Great job.. i really like this one.. i love how the emotions are mixed.. its trye its more real.. really amazing job!

  • 15 years ago

    by BeautifulxMess

    AWwwww. Another great one. I personally think the flow was a little rocky and could have been done better. But still nicely done.
    God Bless 5/5


  • 15 years ago

    by Bombchelle88

    To show your heart to another after having it broken is another way of learning to love again. The first cut is the deepest, a song by Rod Stewart, puts is so simply. Please comment on any one of my poems, I'd appreciate it. Thanks, Michelle =)

  • 15 years ago

    by x.Athame.x

    Another very emotion filled piece. Bittersweet and deep, this write appears to truly come from the heart. I look forward to reading Part 3. :) *5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Simply Complex

    Again great poem =]. I like the happy ending. Keep it up
    *on to read part 3*

  • 15 years ago

    by Liz

    I like how this one ended. First it was all sad and seemed so hopeless...but I didn't expect the ending. I love it!

    -` Glenduh.

  • 15 years ago

    by The Queen of Spades

    I really love thematic poems that go together. I especially liked how you began this poem the same way as you began the other, thats really awesome. Good job 5/5!

  • 15 years ago

    by IdTakeABulletForYou

    Beautiful expression. Awsome twist. Nice "surprise" ending.
    Great job
    ~Stephen White

  • 15 years ago

    by Cassandra Wojick

    I really liked this, great job. youre truly talented.

  • 15 years ago

    by Cella Bella

    Wow, it's so beautiful. I love emotion. I have to go hug by boyfriend right quick lol. It's well written and the flow is just lovely. Great 2nd to part 1. 5/5


    p.s. after i'm done commenting all who posted for comments i'm comming back to read part3 :]

  • 15 years ago

    by Ashleigh Skye

    This one is a lot better than the first one. The rhyming was perfect. And l liked how you showed the difficulty of being in that kind of a relationship. The only critism I have for you is the last verse. All of the rest of them were filled with emotion and power the last verse seemed kind of like a space filler so that it could have an end. I think that needs a little work but other than that amazing. 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by David

    Great sequel to the first one. well done and plz keep writing. the way you describe it all is wonderful and magical.

    5/5 David