Breaking, truly heart breaking poem.
It was so full of emotion, and I loved the first stanza and it just kept getting better.
Keep up the great work!
5/5

This one is just as good as the last i liked how you started off the poem the same as the last too it was great and a lot of emotion as well :) great poem

--emz--

Wow, first it did a 180 in the beginning, and then another 180 at the end....oohh cant wait to read the last part!! :) ((so interesting...))

Gosh...soo true... long distance relationships are so hard to keep..

I'm loving your style i love story poems and i love the fact that it continues on, i love the way you repeated everything another great write!...5/5

The 1st part was better to me but this one is still good.The flow was better but the 1st one held more emotion in my point of veiw but anyways,great job.5/5

<3Amber

Our righting is soo touching

I realy like it , im sure that i will read part 3 nowwwwwwww

Love it Caleb Hammett

Another wonderful poem.