Comments : Two People, So Much Pain

  • 17 years ago

    by Nicole

    5/5 i can see you worked hard on this poem. its excellent. i could feel ur saddness through the poem. i cant answer y two ppl can hurt u so much but i know it happens too easily. i hope that things get better and u get treated better u deserve better than this. ur a wonderful person never forget it

  • 17 years ago

    by Milton

    I know how you feel. in the day I just try and forget her. I tell myself I'm fine. but at the end of the day. I'm stuck wondering why she left me here. good stuff =)

  • 17 years ago

    by Tricky Daze

    Ywow,it's really good,beatifully written,and well done 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by X2892

    This was very very wow, it had so much emotion 2 it, keep up the good work, 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by struggling

    OMG!!!! i love this poem its like your best one yet i really love it so much emotion keep up the good work.5/5.
    ~Shareeda

  • 17 years ago

    by xxxStarSxxx

    I really liked this poem....even though it was lengthey (I'm not big on that sorta thing) but I kept reading because it was good. 5/5 ^_^

  • 17 years ago

    by Rin

    Oh my , hun I am here for you and Loves for you. Great poem I can tell that you really put your sould into this , i feel your pain.

  • 17 years ago

    by barbara

    Damn i can feel your emotion in this one.....nice!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Christina McDowell

    Great job Gabbs! you've been busy. keep it up, i love reading your poems!! 5/5!
    ~Ms.Fobsta

  • 17 years ago

    by Rahl The Layman Lord

    Hey...nice poem...be strong, endure...you do have friends that wont betray you and who do care. Time will heal and time will cure...patience...if i can be patient then you can as well

    -Jason-

  • 17 years ago

    by Kaila

    *OoOoOo* I loved this poem! The anger was absolutly incredible! Like I was getting mad at them too as I read it! I felt like I was the one telling this story, which is exactly what you want the writer to feel! So i think you did an excellent job!

  • 17 years ago

    by Xx Eternal Fantasy xX

    Wonderful poem. i know how u feel. you expressed your feelings so well that i know exactly how you felt. i enjoyed reading this poem. very well written and full of emotion. 5/5. keep up the good work. i hope you get through this and stay strong.

  • 17 years ago

    by ~*SugarCube*~

    This poem is amazing.
    Very touching.
    You did a great job.
    5/5

    ~Chelsea

  • 17 years ago

    by azii

    Great poem!!
    Very touching and full of emotion!
    I loved it!
    You can express you feelings very well..
    I fully understand how you feel... Hope your doing well..
    But well, You really have lots of talent..

    Best of wishes
    && Keep it up
    && Take care

    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Full of emotion. Time will ease your pain. It may not seem like it now but hang in there.......

  • 16 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    Wow... wonderful poem... the emotion is amazing and the word choice is spectacular... a strong poem :D

  • 16 years ago

    by broken angel

    Oh my god sweetie, I could also see your tears on my computer screen. I can tell you poured your heart into this, even though it probably feels like you don't have much of one left. I went through something VERY similar to what you described in your poem this past summer, and the experience almost killed me...literally. I hope you find the courage to love again, and you honestly deserve someone who will care for you, and love you, and treat you the way you deserve to be treated. Try not to dwell on the bad things, the longer you do, the harder it is to pick yourself up. I know that it seems this pain will go on forever, but slowly, as time passes, it will begin to fade. If you ever need to talk to someone, don't hesitate to look me up. Great, GREAT write. 5/5

  • GOOD JOB!! wow it was sooo emotional keep it up hun. 5/5