Wonderful poetry! I haven't read a deep, meaningful poem like this in a while. Talent truly shines through this piece.

Wow this is really good I really liked this part or stanza
"Knife gouges deep
Mascara tears weep
Pale face dripping
Sanity now slipping"

I loved the imagery you put into it. Great read. 5/5

Hey wow that was really great i loved it... i just hope that you remember that a heart upside down it just two tears drops... in other words were ever there is pain somewhere there is happyness!

*&*LostButterfly*&*

Wonderful poem. Excellent word choices. Take care Cindy

Well done.

I luv it! i wish i could write like u! check out my poems sometime if u want!
5/5

Wow this was excellent I got goose bumps all the wat thru nice work!

Your poem was realy realy good!! Mabye you could come over to see mine sometime
^_^

~Sablehuskey~

I love it!! morbid and dark...just what i like.

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Ooooooh. A job well done! 5/5

I really liked dis poem it had a lot of emotion and a great flow to it it wuz very good 5/5 great joB! =]