I'm sorry for your loss. It was a good poem; sad. 5/5

Awww:( i am so sorry for your loss! this poem was great though. i didn't really pay attention to the grammer, because the poem was soooo good! aw:( im sry again:(

First of all Im sorry about your grandmother but just have in mind that even if you couldnt be there for her you will always be bond together with mind and heart. I can realte so much to this poem I wasnt with my grandpa when he passed away and there were so many things I didnt get to tell him. She knows how you feel and will always look out for you. Great poem it goes beyond 5 stars :)

You have an mazing talent, one in which I am sure Barbara was aware of, and don`t worry about overused words, we all use them. I am also sorrry to hear of your loss. Her spirit lives in you I am quite sure. Keep writing. Timothy r

I'm sorry for your loss.
Great poem though.
5/5

I'm sure that you get lots of comments and sympathy toward your loss, but I hope that you realize that I mean it. I lost a family member recently, too. I think this poem means a lot. I know you don't want any type of critisism on this, and honestly I can't think of any besides to just keep writing. You have an incredible gift, even if you don't know it.

Wow. the poem was beautiful. im sorry about what happened. i hope your coping well now. its nice to hear about such a closer relation. im sure some ppl are jealous of you being so close to your nanna. best of wishes! 5/5.

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww dam that poem teared me up :( raw structure works, Raw enotion flows from u and all u do iz move ur fingers. Hope u feelin better
PEaCe
Anthony Villanueva

You did a really good job, it was so sad though, you write beautifully. 5/5

So sad and im so sry

I saw this one before in a contest and it made me cry...but if you read it a million times it is still a good one and sorrowful
Well done
Laura

I can't say I know how you feel, but I think it is really touching that you made a poem for your nanna. I hope that she's happy wherever she is. If someone thought that a poem like this needed grammar changes, they have no heart. Keep up the good work.

Hatori

Great poem. I am sorry about your nan

Wow... so sad. but a great poem nonetheless. I know what you're going through, I lost my grandfather two years ago, four days before my birthday...

5/5
Allanah

I like this poem, it made me want to cry, my grandma died too...I wrote a poem about her yesterday...

=) i dont think anything is wrong with the poem hunni =) its amazing, and your feeling made a beautiful poem. im sorry for you loss and i hope ur feeling a bit better as time passes, remember im sure she will always be with you and smiling on your wedding day even if you cant see her =)

Love
Jacs
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It is so sad ='( i really don't know how it feels to loose someone, but i know i wont be long till it happens =( well, i will keep reading your poems =)

Man, I am sooooo sorry!! =[ I hate losing loved ones.. I know how that is... but, I may not feel the same pain as you...T_T you wrote this very nicely... ^-^ keep up the good work!

x-xWorthlessx-x

Believe me, I lost my nanna days exactly 6 days before you and its the worst thing I have ever had to go through. Worst than losing my mother, depression, and every other thing I have evr gone through. I know exactly how you feel.

Very touching. Brought a tear to my eye. Poetry lets us express ourselves, and our feelings. Never needs to be grammatically correct, because we ourselves are seldom correct. Let it out, and keep writing. My thoughts are with you. Blessed Be.