Zero

by Faceless Mirror   Jan 22, 2007


We calculate the risk and stop.

You go forward.
I go back.

Sense that Zero nullifies.

Minimal effort - no cost.

© Kenneth Gjøse (Faceless Mirror)

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  • 16 years ago

    by Empty Space

    Minimal effort - no risk

    much truth to that

  • 17 years ago

    by e LIZ a beth

    I really like the way you write and the way you think. i mean from what i can see in your poems. but i think that its a little sketchy you need to take time and read them to yourself and maybe if you did that then they'd turn out better.

  • 17 years ago

    by Marjan

    This was really interesting for me!
    just wanted to thank you for sharing this with us! thanks! :)

    Marjan

  • 17 years ago

    by N J Thornton

    I really do like how you write, it's all simple, short but it has a very powerful meaning. I don't know what you intended this to mean, but to me it was about avoiding something because it feels safer and is easier, which is rather a cool message.
    Keep it up.

  • 17 years ago

    by Synh

    Hehe. Short, sweet, and to the point, huh? New but original. I enjoyed it very much. You were able to say so much within but a few words. I feel bad because I want to say more but I truly dont what to say. This is a real piece of art. *5/5*