Comments : Killing Me Softly

  • 17 years ago

    by RJ

    Very creative... Good job.

  • 17 years ago

    by Pyro (Carys)

    Thas extremely clever well done!!

  • 17 years ago

    by BrokenREALiTy

    Yur creative . I`ve read some of your other poems . Yur a pretty visual person[: I like the poem, titled with a happy title, yet the poem is sad .
    ..__MiNDYY

  • 17 years ago

    by Rona

    I thought this was excellent! I like the hidden message "Life is Good" Great job! I like the structure as well.
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by The Queen of Spades

    I really enjoyed this poem, it was very dark and feeling although the x's sort of confused me. Anyways, keep up the excellent work! :)

    ~jas~

  • 17 years ago

    by Tricky Daze

    For people who haven't understood this,everyone noticed life is good but haven't noticed live ignorance faults even it sucks and good on other day i did x's for you to eliminate this two sentences from each other...a warning if u liked it vote and comment,if you didn't please not,i'm angry to see downvotes,deal?
    -Lots Of Love
    Laura

  • 17 years ago

    by Kristina

    Ehh, this wasnt as good as your other one. i really didnt understand it too much. but good job still

    ~Kristina

  • 17 years ago

    by Michelle18

    Great poem...i think the caps made the poem stand out and helped understand the meaning of the poem.

  • 17 years ago

    by *Isolde*

    Wow that was a great poem...had alot of meanings to it...keep it up.

  • 17 years ago

    by lost in lovee

    I like it kinda was confused but i liked it 4/5

  • 17 years ago

    by tryinXtoXholdXmyXheadXup

    Well written and clever and thanks for the comments i an im a battle with deppresion so thanks for the uplifting comments.

    To you who,
    care I thank you big
    you saved me from this hole I dig
    to took the time
    to share a rhyme
    and now I see you through

  • 17 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    This is sooo goooddd!!!
    love the way you write... keep it up

  • 17 years ago

    by TheWorldFellNUWerentThere

    Nobody is happy EVEN they've anything they want
    ^^ They've I think should be * if they have* it would make more sense.

    Other then that its a pretty good poem. It did get me thinking but really dont wanna say what I'm thinking. 5/5

    Happy Valentines Day!

  • 17 years ago

    by amoxi

    The cap letter thing was creative i liked it keep it up