I am sorry if you are going through this right now. Even so, this is such a sad story. You did a fascinating job writing this. Keep Writing! x

Thats so sadddddd

This poem is great...its soo sad at the beginning but at the end i cant help but smile....

"Mommy, now I know,"
"I know where grandpa is",
"And if he stays in my heart",
"I'm sure to stay in his",
"And if I look up in the sky",
"I'll see his shining face,"
"I know that he is happy",
"He's in a better place..."

i really like this part...its my favorite.

Dialogue for the stanza, that's new, but anyways 5/5

Omg this is so sad but so good... =( you are a great writer keep it up...