Heartfelt
lovely
Sweet
all around good stuff
5/5
~TPC~

"we're meant to
create forever."

"Precious memories
L
I
N
G
E
R,
pressed
against the walls of time,"

both parts caught my attention right away and gave true meaning to what you were saying and brought real impact to the reader....bravo!!!

I feel the same way, but I could never say it. I think you did amazing job descibing how you feel. This is the first poem of yours that I have read, but I can tell it won't be the last. 5/5 great job