I love you To dad

by Alex   Jan 24, 2007


As i sit on the bed, i can see the packet,i hear no sound i just feel numb but i move closer, i swallow them all, and begin to feel a strange sensation. I'm falling , as i fall i think about my friends and family and wonder if this was the right thing to do, but nothing makes sense.as i hit the floor, i feel no pain just motionless.

As i open my eyes i see lights and people, i begin to think where i am but i'm drifting in and out of consciousness. i see my dad and try to cry but my eyes won't let me.As i drift away i hear a voice, it said "i love you".

As i watch from the sky above, i see myself been lowered into the ground, i see people standing at my grave .crying, but one man is stood out at the back , i recognize him, its my dad. he's not crying, just stood with one piece of paper, the poem i wrote before i died, he looks up and say's "i love you" and as i look down and look at him i think "i love you to dad".

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  • 18 years ago

    by Tabitha Wacker

    Hey--
    Um..i don't know you at all, but your poem is awesome..holla back at me for a friend...
    Tabby_20092004@yahoo.com..
    Luv..Tabitha

  • 18 years ago

    by Marjan

    Oh, this was so sad. brought tears to my eyes :(

    Marjan

  • 18 years ago

    by tina

    Thats really good
    keep it up