This is a nice poem, and so heartfelt, you have done a great job putting your words together creating this great poem, great job.

Wow. jeez i don't know what exactly I should say; or know what to say. The poem wasn't what I expected from the title. However, the poem was good. GREAT. Nicely written. I could feel the pain. I was thinking...BUTTHOLES. But that was in nice terms. I hate shallow people. 5/5.

The "abab"-style worked very well here. Good use of punctuation. You wrote some good pictures for us here too. I really liked:"An abiding scar wouldn't add.."

Nice write. :-)

-Kenneth G. @ Faceless Mirror.

Excellent Poem. Again. Great Title. Matches the poem with utter excellency. The rhyming was beautiful. The structure ABAB was also beautiful. Not many can pull that off. Most it is done like so; ABCB. So well Done. Voted 5/5

Ps: I ever so enjoy reading your poems. There so lovely.

Wow.. amaizng poem.. i really like this.. perfect rhyme and flow..

Great poem. Very well written. Kept my intrest throughout. You make some very good points that I am sure alot can relate to. Excellent!

Your poem was realy realy good!! Mabye you could come over to see mine sometime
^_^

~Sablehuskey~

Anyone can feel the pain of lost friendship through this poem...

really a brilliant job

Nice, I think I could sense your words and their meaning. Keep up the prose and remember to be one with your poem. If it is real youll be able to feel it breath and its heart to beat. A poem is a fragment of time, a sliver of emotion trapped in our hearts and set free upon the page. Where it can finally sore and fly with other poems or cry and weep with other broken hearts. Poetry is nothing more than emotion set in motion. Poetry is seldom more than the small fossil that waits within the stone begging for someone to chip it free, and then to wonder how it came to be.

Keep up your good works. May your poems be a great frame for your emotions. May there be peace and love in your life. And may the mark you make upon those hearts around you be filled with joyous fragments of your own heart.

Who do I run to for in my time of need?

^ In this line, I think you should take out the word 'for'. I just think it would sound a lot better.

This was really good. Sad, though. It flowed really nicely & it just really touched me. I can totally relate to this.

Beautifully written, Hunny.

Bri [x]

Another WOW poem by you
i say taht you are one of the greatest poet here at P&Q cause your poems are just so great

I know i have commented this before but that time i never knew how talented you were