Now it's all over with

by angela hayter   Jan 25, 2007


Now that it's all over with, your gone you left us all here alone,
not knowing that is going to happen next to us,
all I can see is your sweet face with that grin that made my heart melt, in my head!
our last and fianl words that we had the night before,
i wounder if i had of said someting else to you would it help...
but now that time is moving on with out you,
i know there just wasn't anything we could have done for you sweet face,
I love you more and more each day!

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  • 19 years ago

    by Jasmyn

    I could see the meaning of the poem, but i think it could have been written better. constructive criticism right?