Wow
this is deep
i like it
it got a meanin and it rhymes
most pple cant do tht

Wow that was a great poem keep it up love always linda can you pleases comment my poem all she wanted

Wow great poem I really liked it 5/5 keep it up.

Woah! this is one of my new favorites!

I think it would flow better if it was split into stanza's of four lines each.
But apart from that, some very deep emotions are in this.
Good work
5/5
*Gem*

Hey
i get the feeling of low an dark feeling inside when read this poem.. but i actually like it lol

well done your wicked..

take care

This poem was excelent i liked it a lot it was very well written and had wonderful flow 5/5

Wow!! i really liked it ur an amazing writter i love all your poems 5/5 comment mine if you get the chance thanx!

I loved this it was really deep nice job your poems are great!

Amazing!It was well written and nearly flawless.The stanzas were pretty good.All in all it was a great poem.5/5

<3Amber

This is a so true poem, keep up the good work. I can feel this from beginning to end.

Whoa. That was such a great read. It was really "real" on alot of different levels. Sorry if that doesn't really make sense, that's just the best I could describe it... o_O

5/5