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by the lost mind   Jan 26, 2007


These knives like feeling
my skin is peeling
the knife stoped
when my patence popped
i swore so loud
it made my ancesters proud
everyones afread
at the beast you made
it rages on forward
the things is says so obserd
born to make you suffer
for every second it was coverd
it still bleeds because of your hold
it\'s cuts and bruses ever so cold
nothing you can do can make it better
never will you tame this beast never
so give up and run away
befor it desides to make you pay

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  • 17 years ago

    by repair her heart

    Ok i totally just got this poem.....................last time i didnt so much but i guess one of my most recent poem has the same hidden message or meaning as this one..............i like it

  • 17 years ago

    by repair her heart

    I dont know what u r talking about u r relly good at writing 2 and thanx 4 commenting mine u r really deep in ur writing and ur poems make me think that is a good thing

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