Time

by Taylor   Jan 27, 2007


Time drizzles by on the pavement,
the dark pitter-patter of the city lights
comfort the sounding bells of the cathedral.
Waiting, softly counting the hours until...

The clocks hesitate at every minute,
their winding hands, so sad to note
the passing of another trail of moments,
gone and mourning till the next forgotten second.

Another cold morning in the city.
Frail footsteps of the icy breath of night,
still on the verge of losing itself
in the man-made day of tomorrow.

How time can slowly ease the feeling,
knowing nothing but the almost-forgotten.
Leading, urging us along so slightly,
yet so dutifully and in haste..

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  • 17 years ago

    by N J Thornton

    What an interesting range of descriptions and word formations. You put contradicting images together and actually made the make some sense...how?
    I will say though I had trouble reading the first stanza. it was the last two lines in particular. Comfort THE sounding bells...was odd. I didn't understand "the." Did you mean "the comfort" or "comfort sounding" instead?
    Also, the last line stops in the middle of a sentance...until...what? It seems until was only used to rhyme, so you may what to go over that part.
    The rest was very well written though.
    Thanks for sharing.