Wow..beautiful...dark..its amazing..
perfect 5/5

Always,
koriey

That is such a wonderful poem!! I love it! So well written!! It's so dark and flowing! lol, if you keep this up, you'll end up in favorites list!! But really this poem is just beautiful, 5/5 as always!
Much Love,
~*Danielle*~

I KNEW KORIEY WOULD LIKE THIS AS I WAS READING IT I THOUGHT
DAMN SOUNDS LIKE A POEM BY
KORIEY. ANYWAY IF U READ HER STUFF U WILL SEE WHAT I MEAN
U GUYS PUT WORDS TOGETHER THAT
ONLY PEOPLE LIKE U REALLY
UNDERSTAND THE TRUE MEANING'
I MEAN I LOVE IT BUT ITS ONLY BECAUSE IM SITTING READING AND THINKING COOL POEM BUT I FEEL LIKE A POSER CAUSE I HAVE NO FU**EN
CLUE. ANY WAY LOVE IT 5/5

Wonderful, opens the mind more to the though of life, how is so fragile.

Again thanks for your comments i just want t0o ask you yopu said some of my poems sound like lyrics then how can i put them togeter with music and make a song any
ideals? anyway enough about me did you ever read any of koriey''s poems she writes
that dark stuff like you my favorite poem ever is by her its caklled 8:11 you got to read it anbd all her stuff im going read some
of yours now so don't expect much dark
poems are too deep for me. i love how they sound but im too dumb to get thier real meaning cy

Stnningly beautiful.

thats all that needs to be said.

Okay. I frikken loved this.
This was just beautiful. Simply beautiful.

I felt the whole piece was so powerful and filled with such intensity throughout.
Once again, you did a wonderful job with the imagery.

That ending...wow. So much power that it hits the reader like a slap in the face.

Amazing work on this.

Wow ! amazing & captivating... Well written & beautifully penned 5/5

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