Bloody war....

by broken reflection   Jan 29, 2007


Quietly she sleeps,
Quietly the night creeps,
Silently he cries,
Vibrently they all die,

The rain falls,
on the marching army,
While the troops look towards the sky,
judgment day slowly dawns,

Bloody arms,
hold fallen mates,
Heaven opens it's pearly Gates,
dead brothers rest peacefully away from man's harm,

Crimson sweat run down their faces,
So much killing,
So many places,
When has death ever solved anything?

They fight for their nations,
proudly marching into hell,
So many lovers, fathers, brothers fell,
Destroying god's prized creations,

Quietly she sighs,
Quietly the end nears,
Silently he hides,
Vibrently they all face their fear...

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  • 17 years ago

    by xDieRomanticx

    Ahh sam bery bery nice haha excuse the "bery" lol very sorry for that but yeash 5/5 and im not just saying this coz im your friend

  • 17 years ago

    by Dark Savior

    I give you a five because of your description of everything. I always love a good ending. I think that it is one of the better poems I have read on this site in a while.

    Very good.

    Look forward to more from you.

    I'll watch for more from you in the poetry club we're in.

  • 17 years ago

    by Allisha Fox

    Really good