Take Me

by Kate   Jan 30, 2007


Why did you pick them,
It isn't fair,
It isn't right,
And it's as though you don't have a care,

Such young lives now in danger
Why cant you take me instead,
They deserve to be here
But now they're there lying in that bed,

So many tears,
What do we do?
When we have all these fears,
Why didn't you take me?

Why do the people that don't want to be here get to stay..
And the ones that love it the most don't get to be here..

Just please take me instead..

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  • 16 years ago

    by James Weatherbee

    Maybe its cause the ones that love this world so much already know the best leasons, its hard to lose people, but why would taking your life be better, sure you want to go but maybe thats the reaon your still here, maybe you your life befor you can leave it, no person who dies loving life would ever want you to hurt like it does, but look at it this way maybe the world after ours (no heaven or hell) maybe they need those people, so the way I look at it is why make their next lives sad by being sad learn to smile because they did when they were alive, live to do the things they always wanted to, as a way to keep them alive in you! no one truly dies as long as they are not forgotten! *hugs* Sorry ro barge in, I just felt that needed to be said,

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